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- (INTRO) I'm concerned about the number of sick days staff have been taking recently.
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(DETAILS) Staff in the IT Department have taken a total of 44 sick days so far this month compared to a total of 23 for last month and just 18 for the previous month this is affecting productivity and also placing a lot of stress on the employees who do come to work.
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- In both cases your writing to describe a problem. you can include a lot of useful information in two sentences if you have more than 1 point to making your email you can repeat this pattern first put a short sentence to introduce your point then at a paragraph with two to three sentences to add details you can move from one point to another using a phrase like
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- **there's one more thing I'd like to discuss with you**
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- I'd also like to ask you about…
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- Concerning…
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- **there's one more thing I'd like to discuss with you**
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- I'd also like to ask you about…
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- Concerning…
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- 5. Sign Offs
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