From a0b4aee6ff962f1ed5f332fe0b3ca6cfc5395b40 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthias Eckert Date: Mon, 24 Apr 2023 09:26:36 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Auto saved by Logseq --- journals/2023_04_24.md | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/journals/2023_04_24.md b/journals/2023_04_24.md index e4a88ca3..3f7a9f1c 100644 --- a/journals/2023_04_24.md +++ b/journals/2023_04_24.md @@ -42,8 +42,9 @@ - (INTRO) I'm concerned about the number of sick days staff have been taking recently. (DETAILS) Staff in the IT Department have taken a total of 44 sick days so far this month compared to a total of 23 for last month and just 18 for the previous month this is affecting productivity and also placing a lot of stress on the employees who do come to work. - In both cases your writing to describe a problem. you can include a lot of useful information in two sentences if you have more than 1 point to making your email you can repeat this pattern first put a short sentence to introduce your point then at a paragraph with two to three sentences to add details you can move from one point to another using a phrase like - - **there's one more thing I'd like to discuss with you** - - I'd also like to ask you about… - - Concerning… + - **there's one more thing I'd like to discuss with you** + - I'd also like to ask you about… + - Concerning… + - 5. Sign Offs - - \ No newline at end of file