diff --git a/journals/2023_03_20.md b/journals/2023_03_20.md
index b47a60f5..814ef7a0 100644
--- a/journals/2023_03_20.md
+++ b/journals/2023_03_20.md
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
 		- amid = in the middle of
 		- gdp = bip
 		- weekend’s/Sunday’s deal > weekend/Sunday deal
-		- when we've sat down -> present perfect
-			- vs when we sit down
+		- when we've sat down -> present perfect - focus on process
+			- vs when we sit down -> ... rather than outcome
 		- Let me know
 			- **when** *you finish* the report
 			- once you finish