From bc6acab8d61cdd09b45dd2cd3c25d635bbe9c3f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matthias Eckert Date: Mon, 24 Apr 2023 09:25:36 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Auto saved by Logseq --- journals/2023_04_24.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/journals/2023_04_24.md b/journals/2023_04_24.md index 5edbaecd..e4a88ca3 100644 --- a/journals/2023_04_24.md +++ b/journals/2023_04_24.md @@ -42,4 +42,8 @@ - (INTRO) I'm concerned about the number of sick days staff have been taking recently. (DETAILS) Staff in the IT Department have taken a total of 44 sick days so far this month compared to a total of 23 for last month and just 18 for the previous month this is affecting productivity and also placing a lot of stress on the employees who do come to work. - In both cases your writing to describe a problem. you can include a lot of useful information in two sentences if you have more than 1 point to making your email you can repeat this pattern first put a short sentence to introduce your point then at a paragraph with two to three sentences to add details you can move from one point to another using a phrase like + - **there's one more thing I'd like to discuss with you** + - I'd also like to ask you about… + - Concerning… + - - \ No newline at end of file