diff --git a/journals/2023_04_24.md b/journals/2023_04_24.md
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@@ -22,9 +22,13 @@
 		- explain you WHYs
 			- make it as short as possible: make you purpose clear quickly not to make others make out
 		- FORMAL
-			- I’m writing in connection withwith regard to
-			- regarding/concerning sth
+			- I’m writing in connection with
+			  with regard to
+			  regarding/concerning sth
 			- I want**ed** to follow up on… and
-			- I would like to ask about…
+			-
+			- I **would like** to ask about…
+		- LESS FORMAL opening sentences
+			-
 	-
 	-
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